Friends for Life
Adelle leaned over the side table, the one with wadded up
paper stuffed under one of the legs shoved up against the mauve wall, and
stared at the name on her cell.
Brandon.
She picked up the phone and swiped to answer.
“Hi.”
“Jenny broke up with me. Can I come over?”
She glanced up at a photo they took at Coney Island when
they were both twelve, the day they hooked pinkies.
Friends for life.
“Sure.”
“Uh, did I wake you?”
“No, it’s cool. I’m up.”
“Thanks. Be there soon.”
She lost count of the number of times he’d called to request
some moral support, but he’d had three breakups to her zero. Heck, she’d never
dated anyone.
Yeah, friends for
life. Then hugs and giggles.
Not even ten minutes had passed before a knock echoed
through the door. She urged her feet
across the plush, dull-brown carpet. Her toes pinched softness with each step.
She sighed when her fingers wrapped around the knob. With a quick look in the
mirror hung next to the door, she smoothed down a few flyaway, ebony strands.
She sighed again and tugged at the knob. His musky scent wafted up her nose and
into a place of deep longing.
“You sure this is okay?” he asked. Eyes red from crying set
in a face worn from grief pierced her heart.
“Yeah, come in.” She led him to the sofa and sat
Indian-style.
He plopped down on one leg bent at the knee, the other leg
stretched out on the floor toward her. His frown gnawed at her.
“So what happened?” she asked.
“I wasn’t paying enough attention. ‘Aloof’ and ‘lacking
romance’ are the words she used. Why can’t I keep a girlfriend?”
The response froze in her throat. His question had to be
rhetorical. She stared at his mouth as he kept talking, but barely comprehended
a word. Her reluctance to look away was unwarranted. She’d memorized his lips enough
to sketch them in her drawing pad over a dozen times. Two determined blinks
brought her back to the present.
“How’s your mom?” he asked.
She gulped. “She’s fine. She and Gus are thinking about
getting married. And your mom?” No way did she want to dwell on the inevitability
of getting a stepfather. It had been two years since Dad died, but Adelle
wasn’t ready. However, that wasn’t what bugged her. Even her mom found someone.
“She’s good. We’re talking again,” he said and smiled.
Painful memories lingered. When both moms divorced their
fathers twelve years ago, she and Brandon were thrust into separate cities with
their dads. That summer promise survived written letters and phone calls. Their
decision to live in San Francisco for the past two years reconnected them and
pulled them apart at the same time. Brandon found girls to love. She had
sketches of his lips.
“Thanks for being here whenever I call.”
“What are friends for, huh?” She paused, attempting to smile. His gaze unsettled her.
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like your suspense, i'm thinking out loud the entire time i'm reading and yes on the edge of my seat wanting to know more!! great job!!
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ReplyDeletegood read!
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DeleteVery descriptive; In a few short lines I can picture the scene and the characters and am interested in their story.
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DeleteSweetly suspenseful and romantic, a good read, Not sure of the ages of those would be lovers so I'm guessing 16, 17 or so; I'd make that clear before whatever comes next. She wants more than sketched lips...Thanks Cassandra, your writing makes us want more!
ReplyDeleteSandra Turner-Barnes
Thanks so much. There are clues that they are in their early to mid twenties. They were twelve before their parents broke up. That was twelve years previous as of this scene. Also, they agreed to be neighbors for the past two years. Read again. It's there.
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